The graph below gives information on the population of turtles in India from 1980 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information on the population of turtles in India from 1980 to 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided graph represents the
number
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of various
kind
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kinds
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of
turtles
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found in India between the
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year
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years
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1980 and 2012.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the
number
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of total species remained pretty much the same throughout the
year
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. Olive ridley
turtles
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outnumbered Leatherback
turtles
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from
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year
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1987,
whereas
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the
number
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of green
turtles
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slightly declined over the years. In the initial
year
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(1980), the total population of the
turtles
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were 100 and reached its peak point in the
year
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1987 (110).
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, starting from the
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1988 the aggregate sum of
turtles
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showed slight variations up until the
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2003 and gradually inclined from approximately 103 to more than 105 in the
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2012. Leatherback
turtles
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and Oliver ridley
turtles
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were moving in the same direction for
couple
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of years but
then
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from
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1987, they started going in opposite
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ways
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. The
number
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of leatherback
turtles
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increased and reached above 130 in the
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1997 and continued to be still. Contrastingly, Oliver ridley
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sharply declined as it reached below 70 in the
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1997. It
then
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dropped to less than 60 in the
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2008 and stayed almost consistent until the
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2012.The
number
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of green
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reached its highest point in the
year
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1982 (110)
then
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remained static in the coming years and reached less than 100 in the
year
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2012.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, turtles, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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