The graph below shows the annual visitor spend for visitors to New Zealand from 5 countries for the years 1996 - 2014
The line graph illustrates information about the annual explore how much amount spent
for
New Zealand Change preposition
on
trip
from Fix the agreement mistake
trips
various
five nations namely Australia, Correct word choice
apply
USA
, Correct article usage
the USA
UK
, Japan and China from 1996 to 2014.
Correct article usage
the UK
Overall
, Australians Linking Words
were
spent more money Unnecessary verb
apply
to
New Zealand Change preposition
on
trip
as compared to other Fix the agreement mistake
trips
given
nations.Verb problem
apply
In contrast
, China Linking Words
had
spent Unnecessary verb
apply
lower
amount Correct article usage
a lower
for
Change preposition
on
tour
.
The graph Fix the agreement mistake
tours
describes
that Verb problem
shows
on
Australian visitors Change preposition
apply
were
spent 1000 Unnecessary verb
apply
NLS
in 1996 Use synonyms
then
it Linking Words
was
gradually increased until 2006, at 2500 Unnecessary verb
apply
NLS
, after that it was reduced slightly by 2000 in 2008. From 2008 to 201, Use synonyms
this
was a fluctuation and achieved 2000 Linking Words
NLS
in 2014.The USA had around 800 Use synonyms
NLS
in 1996 and there was a gradual increase until 2010 Use synonyms
then
it was reduced in 2014, Linking Words
at
around 1100 Change preposition
to
NLS
. Use synonyms
In contrast
, the Linking Words
Uk was
spent 500 Verb problem
UK
NLS
in 1996, Use synonyms
from
2002 to 2014, there was a significant Correct word choice
and from
rose
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rise
by
700 Change preposition
of
NLS
in 2014.
Use synonyms
In addition
, Japan Linking Words
was
spent 500 Unnecessary verb
apply
NLS
in 1996 Use synonyms
thereafter
Linking Words
this
was a fluctuation until 2014, at 500 Linking Words
NLS
. China Use synonyms
has
spent the lower amount on Unnecessary verb
apply
trip
, which was around 1 Fix the agreement mistake
trips
NLS
, there was a gradual growth until 2004, ar 500 Use synonyms
NLS
, From 2004 to 2008, it was reduced slightly, which w as around 400 Use synonyms
NLS
, Use synonyms
Betw2008
and 2014, there was a gradual increase and achieved 500 Correct your spelling
From 2008
NLS
in 2014.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words nls with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduced" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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