The pie charts below show the devices people in the 18 to 25 age group use to watch television in Canada in different years.
The charts illustrate gadgets which were used by young minds to watch
TV
in Canada in a decade from 2009 to 2019.
Overall
, what can be visible from the graph is that conventional TV
users experienced a downward trend while
flat screen
Add a hyphen
flat-screen
TV
consumer
witnessed an upward trend. Another interesting feature is that in a decade the number of mobile phone and tablet watchers increased whilst laptop and desktop computer viewers decreased.
Looking into the details of watchers, Fix the agreement mistake
consumers
2009
and 2019 the share of flat screen viewers Change preposition
in 2009
were
8% and 27% respectively. Correct subject-verb agreement
was
Similarly
the usage of conventional Add a comma
Similarly,
TV
by youngesters
Correct your spelling
youngsters
were
the top method in 2009 that accounted for 34% (more than a third) Change the verb form
was
whereas
in 2019 only utilized this
equipment in moderate
amount (4%, less than one in twenty).
Moving to the data of consumers which can beCorrect article usage
a moderate
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