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The diagram below show how leather goods are produced.

The diagram below show how leather goods are produced.
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The rendered chart illustrates the manufacturing of leather
goods
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.
Overall
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, it is clearly seen that there are eleven main steps to producing leather
items
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.
Also
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, all the steps were taken place with the help of tools.
According to
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 the given diagram, at
first,
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animal skin is collected and hung on the pipes to dry. Afterwards, it is transported with the help of a truck which will go to the factory for other steps. Once the material has been reached to a factory washing is started in the lime water. In the fifth step,
goods
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 are kept in the lime jar for soaking.
Then
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,the
items
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 are flattered with the flattering machine. Moving
further
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, the
goods
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 are kept in the water and vegetable matter for soaking.
Apart from
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this
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, before transporting the
goods
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,
these
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they
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 are polished with the equipment. After polishing, all the
items
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 are sent to the factory to produce several things of leather
such
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 as bags, shoes, balls and other
items
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.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words goods, items with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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