the graph below show the percentage of people by age group visting the cinema at least once per month in one particular country between 1978 and 2008.
The line graph
represent
the data about the different type of Change the verb form
represents
age
group
people
visiting Change preposition
of people
theatre
at least once per month. The data show about in one Correct article usage
the theatre
partivular
country between 1978 and 2008. The information Correct your spelling
particular
given
in Add the auxiliary verb
is given
precentage
.
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percentages
Overall
, it can be seen that teenagers and adults peoples are more likely to visit cinemas compared to other age
groups, which are between those years.
According to
the line graph, the youngest group
are highest
visitor Change the article
the highest
in
the cinema in the year 1978 which Change preposition
to
is
near 90 Wrong verb form
was
percent
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per cent
then
it was fluctuated till 2008 and reached by
approximately 88 Change preposition
apply
percent
. The senior Citinez Change the spelling
per cent
group
had the lowest attendance which was 40 percent
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per cent
then
it Replace the word
than
was
fell by 10% in the year 1988 Unnecessary verb
apply
then
again rose to 20 percent
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per cent
untill
1998 and it was stable for 2008 which was 50 Correct your spelling
until
percentage
.
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per cent
Additionally
, the 25-34 age
had 80% visiting cinema in 1988, then
it was
decreased by 10% for Unnecessary verb
apply
next
ten Correct article usage
the next
year
and again reached Fix the agreement mistake
years
by
80% in 1998 and Change preposition
apply
at the end
of 2008 it was slightly down which was approximately 75%. The middle age
group
(35-49) had the average number of visitor
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visitors
in
the cinema in 1988, which was 60% Change preposition
to
then
fluctuated untill
2008 and reached Correct your spelling
until
at
almost 70%.Remove the preposition
apply
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