The chart below gives information about how families in one country spent their weekly income in 1968 and in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart illustrates the average weekly spending income in a special country by some different families.
Overall
, it can be seen that, in 1968 most families spent lots of their money on food, while
they would rather pay more attention to other necessary needs in the following 5 decades.
In 1968, the amount of food was the highest in 35, although
that of fuel and power was the least roughly in 5. Furthermore
, the share of housing and clothing and footwear remained the same, and then
other sections such
as leisure, transport, personal goods
and household goods
were approximately between 5 and 10.
In 2018, the number of food witnessed a decline of half of its value, whereas
that of leisure, and housing experienced substantial growth of nearly twice their number. Moreover
, the proportion of fuel and power, clothing and footwear and personal goods
were about
between 3 and 5. Change preposition
apply
According to
the other 2 sections, the amount of housing goods
remained unchanged, whilst that of transport went up by almost 5.Submitted by ziba.gharehnazifam on
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