El Niño is the name of a warm ocean current that affects weather patterns on both sides of the Pacific Ocean. The diagrams compare normal conditions in the Pacific with El Niño conditions.

El Niño is the name of a warm ocean current that affects weather patterns on both sides of the Pacific Ocean. The diagrams compare normal conditions in the Pacific with El Niño conditions.
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The diagrams illustrate the changes in the atmospheric conditions in different parts of the Pacific Ocean namely West Pacific and East Pacific, which stem from EL Nino.
Overall
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, It is clear evidence that the most noticeable coverts are the directions of wind and
water
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, which cause the switch of
weather
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pattern in Australia and Peru. In terms of the West Pacific, in the standard
weather
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conditions,
this
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area is dominated by weak
winds
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and warm
water
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, so Australia is likely to have a
weather
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pattern of rain.
By contrast
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, the West side will witness a significant shift in climate when a warm ocean current goes easterly. To illustrate, strong
winds
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are blowing over the Western part and giving Australia nice
weather
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with sunny. Regarding the East Pacific, in a typical day of standard
weather
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conditions, cool
water
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and rich nutrients are pushed vertically to the ocean's surface by strong trade
winds
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.
As a result
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, Peru experiences a warm climate with a large fish population.
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, there are dramatic changes in the East side’s
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pattern which is affected by EL Nino. Specifically, the number of fish sees a sharp decrease since seawater is separated into two layers with cool
water
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flowing underneath warm one which causes the decline of nutrients, and weak
winds
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blowing above.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, weather, winds with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "illustrate" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stand" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • trade winds
  • upwelling
  • nutrient-rich
  • marine life
  • fisheries
  • thunderstorms
  • weather patterns
  • suppress
  • coral bleaching
  • livelihoods
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