The bar chart below shows current health expenditure totals as percentages of GDP* for various European countries for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The expenses for different European nations on health sector with respect to their respective country's GDP in given in the bar chart for the years 2002, 2007 and 2012.
Switzerland
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had the highest fraction of health expenditure in ratio to its GDP Unnecessary verb
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was
in all the years 2002, 2007 and 2012 and Unnecessary verb
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also
France was the doing the same in 2007 with 11% but the spending was less in 2002 and 2012. Rephrase
apply
Moreover
, other countries like Denmark, Norway, Luxembourg, Netherlands, Slovenia, Belgium and Spain had similar kind
of spending Fix the agreement mistake
kinds
of
the medical field with Change preposition
on
was
about 9% Unnecessary verb
apply
in
average.
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on
However
, Estonia had the lowest percentage of expenditure with only 3% of the total GDP in all these given years. The countries like Estonia, Lithuania and Poland didn't have the same focus in
health as their Change preposition
on
neighbor
. Poland was only averaging about 6% and only 5% for Lithuania.Change the spelling
neighbour
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