The graphs below show current rates of secondary and higher education among people in various parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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information comparison rates of secondary and higher Change preposition
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education
among people in various parts of the world.
The first,
secondary education
by region
and gender
in various parts of the world in 2006s, the percentage
Europe 100 % for females
and 90% for males
, SSA at 10% for males
and females
at 20%, while
in America Latin the percentage
for male at 40% and female at 45%, and East Asia the percentage
for region
and gender
male almost 50% and female at 45%.
The second,
Higher Education
by region
and Gender
for Europe, the percentage
for males
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is 40
females
50 %, In SSA the Change preposition
for females
percentage
is 20 % for males
and 15 % for females
, In American Latin the percentage
is different between percentages for higher education
by region
male and female is 30 % and 20%, while
East Asia different percentange
between male or female as similarities but male higher.
In conclusion, different secondary and higher Correct your spelling
percentage
percentages
education
by region
and gender
most highest is Europe and and lowest is SSA.Submitted by wiwinwindiahadi on
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