In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In
this
era, With rapid
advancing technology. In no time print media or Change the word
rapidly
litreature
will Correct your spelling
literature
sease
to exist Correct your spelling
cease
due to
the availabilty
of all those online and even without paying. I firmly Correct your spelling
availability
belive
in Correct your spelling
believe
this
notion, And in forthecoming
passage Correct word choice
the upcoming
i'll
explain the fact that it will reduce the Change the capitalization
I'll
expence
and prevent Correct your spelling
expense
expenses
waste
of natural Correct article usage
the waste
resource
Fix the agreement mistake
resources
as well as
it is easily accessable
.
Correct your spelling
accessible
To begin
with, Producing printed books
and newspaper
requires Fix the agreement mistake
newspapers
lot
of resources and money. From the production to delivery of any document there are many people, Change the article
a lot
mechinery
and materials Correct your spelling
machinery
machines
are
needed which Unnecessary verb
apply
requires
currency and Correct subject-verb agreement
require
this
is recovered by Correct article usage
the consumers
consumers
pocket. As time passes more and more people will gain access to digital media and they won't have to pay the Change noun form
consumers'
consumer's
expence
. Correct your spelling
expense
expenses
For instance
, more folk will choose something which is available freely compared to something for which they have to pay.
Another thing is that it is easy to access and carry one device in which you can store lots of books
compared to carry
physical Wrong verb form
carrying
books
which can be heavy and demand much space. Such
as, Carrying one mobile is far more convineant
and easy to use Correct your spelling
convenient
then
carrying ten Replace the word
than
books
. Additionally
, you can gain access to news
much Add an article
the news
quickly
and Correct quantifier usage
more quickly
wont
have to wait for Add an apostrophe
won't
newspaper
to come.
Add an article
the newspaper
a newspaper
To sum up
, Although
physical newspaper
and Fix the agreement mistake
newspapers
books
are conventional
Add an article
the conventional
way
of reading and Fix the agreement mistake
ways
stay
up to date with news. It will change with time Wrong verb form
staying
due to
easily accessable
digital Correct your spelling
accessible
form
and reduced Fix the agreement mistake
forms
expences
Correct your spelling
expenses
of
Change preposition
apply
it
.Correct pronoun usage
apply
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