The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
The bar charts
depicts
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depict
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countries' export in a Correct article usage
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veriety
of industries of goods between 2015 and 2016. There are 6 reported categories: Correct your spelling
variety
petrolium
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petroleum
products
, engineered goods, gems and jewellery, agricultural products
, and textiles
. The table illustrates the percentage change in value
in each categories
in the same years.
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category
Overall
, the majority of the markets increased in terms of value
except for merely one industry. The petroleum
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Petroleum
products
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the most valuable in both Change the verb form
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year
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,
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textiles
is
the smallest in terms of Change the verb form
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value
, but
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its
rate of change was the highest among all the industries.
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According to
the graph and the table, the most valuable market was petroleum products
which was at around 60.5 million dollar
, which Change to a plural noun
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it
appreciated to approximately 63.5 million Correct pronoun usage
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dollar
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a year later. The appreciation Change preposition
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also
occured
with engineered goods, agricultural Correct your spelling
occurred
products
, and textiles
, which the market that increase
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increased
value
the most was textiles
(soared by 15.24 per cent). In contrast
, depreciation occurs with gems and jewellery. It decreased by 5.18 per cent amking
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value
to be approximately 40.18% from 45.36%.Submitted by dondollaraus on
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