The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.

The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.
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The maps below illustrate the development of a village called Ryemouth between 1995 and now.
Overall
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, over the
last
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30
years
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there has been an increase in housing and apartments.
On the other hand
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, the natural part of the village,
such
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as the farmland and forest park has been demolished. One of the biggest differences between the two maps is the housing. The map displaying the present day shows how the road where the previous houses were, has been extended to the left in order for more houses to be built. Over the time period,
this
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number has doubled from 8 to 16. There are
also
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4 more apartment blocks in place of the fish market that was there in 1995. The hotel has
also
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had the addition of a new car park. To the east of the houses, all the farmland and forest park have been destroyed and replaced by a golf course and tennis court. The shops that were once opposite the fish markets and the fishing port are now a chain of restaurants. Only the cafe has remained
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the
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30 years and is situated across
the
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from the
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hotel.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urban development
  • Infrastructure
  • Residential area
  • Commercial district
  • Public amenities
  • Greenery
  • Renovation
  • Expansion
  • Demolition
  • Construction
  • Accessibility
  • Public transport
  • Urbanization
  • Evolution
  • Gentrification
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