In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Society in several countries in the world

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argue

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that having a landed

house

is

preferably

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than rent

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to renting

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. In

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essay,

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will explain the reason behind

this

perspective and explain why

this

should be perceived as a positive trend. There are several possible

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why

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buying a

house

is

consider

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as

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a necessary thing.

First,

is because

house

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a house

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is an asset for

long term

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investment. The price of

house

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a house

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predicted can rise

for

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apporximately

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approximately

10

percent

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per cent

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every year.

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, owning a

house

is part of

financial

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the financial

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allocation

for

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secure our money from inflation.

Secondly

, as the owner of the

house

, a person

have

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freedom

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the freedom

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to

decorating

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or

renovating

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their

house

.

In contrast

of

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renting,

that

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they have a contract with the rental to

well

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maintain their asset.

For instance

, in Indonesia cost

for

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of

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a

house

increased gradually

for

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almost 30% in the

last

10 years,

thus

for

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individual who allocate their money wisely

in

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property could get unrealized gain. Having a private

house

should

be consider

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be considered

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as a positive development because

this

is one parameter of a person can manage their money.

As a result

, if there are more people having a

house

in a country, undirectly, it could contribute increase

the

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rate of

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the middle

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middle class

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economy. The level of investing literacy

also

could grow. To illustrate, the government of Indonesia have a

subsidies

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subsidy

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program for their citizen to get

lower

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a lower

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price of

house

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the house

a house

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, with the objective is to decrease the level of homeless people. In conclusion,

house

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a house

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is

essential

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an essential

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property to have

and

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any

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part of

long-term

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a long-term

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investment.

Moreover

, it can increase the level of economy for a country. I,

therefore

, remain firmly

conviced

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convinced

that owning a

house

can

olny

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only

be seen as a positive development.