The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university

did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the

salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.
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depicts a place where the anthropology
students
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work
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after
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accomplishing their courses. The table below represents the
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of the recipients who have got at least
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5 years
. The fact that becomes clear from studying the graph is that the majority of the
alumnus
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find
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full-time
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(52%). As for another part of the
students
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, they find part-time
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which is 15% of them all. Third by the quantity is
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of unemployed who are
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12%
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all graduates. The next group contains
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who
work
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full-time and do postgraduate studies and is estimated
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8% of the total amount, their number is equal to the
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of
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,
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number is equal to that of
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for whom no information is available. The
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group are people who combine part-time jobs with postgraduate study and are defined as 5% of the given amount. The
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who are employed in the government sector
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the highest salaries (5% - $25,000-49,999, 15% - $50,000-74,999, 30% - $75,000-99,999, 30% - $100,000 or more). Freelancers at the same time
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got high salaries too (5%, 15%, 40% and 40% considerably). Private companies workers
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got the smallest wage from the given(10%, 35%, 25% and 30%
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). Glancing at
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the overall
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picture, the number of graduates who continue the studying process is not high and is about 13%
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the type of employment with the highest wages as Anthropologist is government sector and the lowest ones are in the private one.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words students, work with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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