Some people feel that it is better to live in the city while others believe that life better in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
Many
people
believe that living conditions in cities
are better than rural
areas. Change preposition
in rural
However
, there is another group of people
who think that life
in countryside
is Add an article
the countryside
a
way better than Correct article usage
apply
urban
Change preposition
in urban
places
. I believe that it's impossible to live in cities
without a job or an own bussines
. Correct your spelling
business
This
essay intends to analyze both views along with
my perspective.
Firstly
, those who believe that life
in megapolises is the best option to live have several reasons. One of them is the public transport system, due to
the lack of developed public transport in countryside
Add an article
the countryside
people
are very dependent on their cars to get around but in cities
Add a comma
cities,
people
aren't faced with public transport problems and they didn't
have to get a car just to go to their work. Another advantage
urban Wrong verb form
don't
life
is there is
a lot of Correct subject-verb agreement
are
places
such
supermarkets
and hospitals and you don't have to walk several Change preposition
as supermarkets
kilometers
to find them which is usually Change the spelling
kilometres
happened
in rural areas.
Wrong verb form
happening
On the other hand
, there are also
a bunch of disadvantages of city life
so people
just prefer to spend their lifetime in countryside
. The first reason for Add an article
the countryside
this
is the
rural areas have less air pollution than Correct your spelling
that
cities
because there are less
factories and vehicles that contaminate the the. Change the quantifier
fewer
Also
there are less density and less congestion Add a comma
Also,
comparing
to urban Wrong verb form
compared
places
. The third but at the same time a very important one is the sense of community in slow pace
Correct your spelling
slow-paced
places
. For example
, the
Correct article usage
apply
people
who live in countryside
are more polite and communicative than Add an article
the countryside
people
who live in cities
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Address all parts of the task by discussing both views and providing a clear opinion. Ensure your essay answers the prompt completely.
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- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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