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The table
reprisents
how much was the Correct your spelling
represents
pilice
budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain and where that Correct your spelling
police
many
came from and Correct your spelling
money
charts
give information Correct article usage
the charts
how
it was used.
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on how
source
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sources
budget
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the budget
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. In 2018 in every source there Change to a plural noun
years
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changes
and Change the noun form
change
total
amount of Correct article usage
the total
money
is
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apply
up
almost by 10 in a Change preposition
apply
year
,on the contrary
, other sources were almost similar in both year
,Fix the agreement mistake
years
as well as
in case
of Correct article usage
the case
national
government.
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the national
a national
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part Correct article usage
The main
on
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of
charts
of Correct article usage
the charts
money
spent is salaries for officers and staff,however
,in 2018 amount
of spent Correct article usage
the amount
money
was
decreased by 6 Unnecessary verb
apply
percent
. Unlike Change the spelling
per cent
salaries
part, Correct article usage
the salaries
spent
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the spent
money
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year
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