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The chart below shows literacy rates in several different countries around the world.

The chart below shows literacy rates in several different countries around the world.
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the chart below illustrates the literacy rates in four nations and the world.
overall
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, it is clear to see that the
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proportion
 of
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,
as well as
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females
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 and total
propotion
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proportion
, is the highest value.
Country
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 C hold the second highest value, meanwhile, nation A
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 the lowest figure. The percentage of
female
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 and
male
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 in
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 D was 99%, which dominated other countries in the chart. Having the same trend,
country
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 C's female rate started at 86.9% and that of
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 was 93.9%.
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 A
hold
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 the lowest rate at 3 catalogues, which was 47.8%, 63.5% and 32.7% respectively.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words country with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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