The diagram describes the process of producing skin products.

The diagram describes the process of producing skin products.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram describes the process of producing skin products.
The diagram describes the
process
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of producing skin products. In general, there are 3 main steps in the
process
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of making leather
goodss
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goods
. In the first stage, animal hide
being
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is
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dried in
open
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the open
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air, before it is delivered to a manufacturing plant by
the
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apply
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truck.
After
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this
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step, the animal hide is washed in a tank with water and lime, before it is soaked in a different tank with lime.
This
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is followed by the flattening
process
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, the animal hide is flattened by a machine before it is soaked with
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a speacial
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speacial
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special
liquid
is
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apply
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called tannin
involves
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and involves
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water and vegetable matter. After that, the skin is polished by a roller.
At the end
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of the
process
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, the skin is delivered to a different factory before
is it
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being
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made
a
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for a
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wide range of products
different
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apply
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for example
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shoes, handbags,
clothe
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clothes
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and sports equipment.

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words process with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "describes" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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