It is a highly debatable issue whether the state should provide
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monetary assistance to
people
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in
arts
or not.
However
, I, believe that
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should not support the
people
by giving
money
to them as it increases the burden
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as well
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people
can
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the urge to earn
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money
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be discussed with relevant examples in the subsequent paragraphs.
To commence with, the
people
who are
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fine
arts
should get some financial help from the
government
as they represent our nation and
this
is the only source they
are having Wrong verb form
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. To be more precise ,
people
doing creative
arts
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limited
sourceFix the agreement mistake
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of earnings and only
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of them can
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fame in it .
For example
, in
this
contemporary
social media can make a person over night star but only some of them can maintain their stardom
due to
that they lost the ways to make
money
for their survival.
Thus
, financial help from
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can be
boonCorrect article usage
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for many
people
.
On the other hand
, there are umpteen reasons why the authorities should not support the artist financially but the prominent one is that it increases the burden of the
government
.
In other
the state has
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of responsibilities for which the authority
needChange the verb form
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funds
and giving
money
can
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towards the lack of
funds
. To cite an example, the legislature has
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of projects to work on and
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funds
can leave adverse effects and can cause
in the growth of the country.
Hence
government
should organise events through which the artist
as well as
the state can generate the finances.
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,
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another worth considering point is that it can make the artists indolent which can stop them from doing
. To justify, if one
getCorrect subject-verb agreement
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everything thing without doing anything surely can
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the ability of a person. To illustrate,
spoon feedingAdd a hyphen
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makes
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people
lazy which destroys their true potential.
Therefore
,
governmentAdd an article
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should not financially assist
people
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creative
arts
.
By
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way
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conclusion I concur that
although
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there are some merits of helping financially
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the creative
art'sChange noun form
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people
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, there are more
drawbackFix the agreement mistake
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and
governmentCorrect article usage
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should invest the
funds
in other major projects for the betterment of the country.