The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summariae the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided chart depicts the proportion of electrical appliances
use
by households in the two years Wrong verb form
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period
while
the other illustrates the amount of time Linking Words
consumption
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consumed
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housework in a particular country from 1920 to 2019. It can be clearly seen that there were various changes regarding the percentage of families’ electrical appliances and the number of hours of chorus per household experienced Change preposition
on
downward
trend.
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According to
the initial chart, there was a Linking Words
fluctuated
figure in the proportion of families who used washing Replace the word
fluctuating
machine
as it increased dramatically from 40% (1920) to 70% (1960) and dropped to just under 70% in 1980. Fix the agreement mistake
machines
However
, it Linking Words
finally
reached its peak at nearly 80% in the final year. Linking Words
On the other hand
, the same pattern showed in the percentages of households who owned Linking Words
refrigerator
and vacuum Fix the agreement mistake
refrigerators
cleaner
. They started at just under 10% and 30% respectively in 1920 and rocketed to 100% in the Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
last
two years.
Meanwhile, looking Linking Words
to
the second chart, the number of time spent per Change preposition
at
families
per week Fix the agreement mistake
family
recorded
at 50 hours in 1920 and decreased significantly to nearly 10 hours in the final year.Add a missing verb
was recorded
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