The graph below gives information about the sales of the three most commonly purchased items in a particular bakery for the year 2014.

The graph below gives information about the sales of the three most commonly

purchased items in a particular bakery for the year 2014.
The graph illustrates the total
sales
of the bakery throughout the
year
for general items acquired by consumers in 2014. It is evident that pie
sales
increased gradually over the
year
.
In contrast
, bread and buns depict fluctuating monthly
sales
. Bread
sales
fell dramatically in the first quarter of the
year
, dropping from 80
thousand
in January to 45
thousand
by March.
Sales
then
stabilized until the third quarter before rising steadily.
However
, they experienced a decline towards the end of the period.
On the other hand
, pie purchases increased gradually from 10
thousand
in January to a slight rise of 20
thousand
in the two-thirds of the
year
, ending with a swift increment to 40
thousand
by December. Meanwhile, consumer purchases of buns maintained steady growth until August, followed by a drastic fall
at the end
of the period.
Therefore
, the bakery experienced a loss in bun
sales
by 110
thousand
in the
year
2014,
whereas
sales
of bread and pies remained considerable throughout the 
year
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, year, thousand with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 2 times.
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