The graph below gives information about the sales of the three most commonly purchased items in a particular bakery for the year 2014.
The graph illustrates the total
sales
of the bakery throughout the Use synonyms
year
for general items acquired by consumers in 2014. It is evident that pie Use synonyms
sales
increased gradually over the Use synonyms
year
. Use synonyms
In contrast
, bread and buns depict fluctuating monthly Linking Words
sales
.
Bread Use synonyms
sales
fell dramatically in the first quarter of the Use synonyms
year
, dropping from 80 Use synonyms
thousand
in January to 45 Use synonyms
thousand
by March. Use synonyms
Sales
Use synonyms
then
stabilized until the third quarter before rising steadily. Linking Words
However
, they experienced a decline towards the end of the period.
Linking Words
On the other hand
, pie purchases increased gradually from 10 Linking Words
thousand
in January to a slight rise of 20 Use synonyms
thousand
in the two-thirds of the Use synonyms
year
, ending with a swift increment to 40 Use synonyms
thousand
by December. Meanwhile, consumer purchases of buns maintained steady growth until August, followed by a drastic fall Use synonyms
at the end
of the period.
Linking Words
Therefore
, the bakery experienced a loss in bun Linking Words
sales
by 110 Use synonyms
thousand
in the Use synonyms
year
2014, Use synonyms
whereas
Linking Words
sales
of bread and pies remained considerable throughout the Use synonyms
year
.Use synonyms
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