Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?

Cinema enjoyers have a debate about whether people need to bring cellphones or tablets into the room since it can ruin the

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experience. We could explain it from both

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essay, I will discuss the difference

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these opinions.

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, some people bring their

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because they are preparing just in case some urgent thing happens, that can cause them to leave the cinema early.

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, if a family member suddenly

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help, it is very important to get the notification as soon as possible. Everyone should

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realize, not every watcher has the

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advantage

of not being disturbed outside of their working time.

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who work as a freelancer should be on their

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for 24 hours, and always be ready to work

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they get an opportunity. But,

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relate to the opposite views, disagreeing about

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a lot of time a person who plays

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annoy others around them.

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can caused by how bright their screen is, which can ruin the atmosphere inside the theatre. Even, some people are ignorant enough to play loud sounds from their tablets, and cause disadvantages for the whole room.

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, if you

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your social media with a

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volume, you can not fully enjoy the films and

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others

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. In conclusion, both perspectives have their own reasons.

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, we should respect each other

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watching the film, and for those who bring cell

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phone

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, just keep it silent and be polite.