IELTS Writing Task 2 Topics: Number 8. Some think that teenagers should follow older people’s rules. Others thinks that it is natural for them to challenge what older people say. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Whilst some
people
think that teenagers should stricty
follow older's Correct your spelling
strictly
rules
, others have a contrary opinion about how they will naturally challenge the elder. I believe that a young individual do not need to stick to the old rules
in their life,
because many things are different now compared to some decades ago.
On Remove the comma
apply
one
hand, Correct article usage
the one
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the eldery
eldery
want Correct your spelling
elderly
people
in their teenage years to just follow their rules
. Some of them claim that their ways are the 'correct' options among all. This
can be caused by their ego and belief after many trial
and errors during their period. To make the youngster's personal life much easier, they often offer their opinions and Fix the agreement mistake
trials
rules
to follow. For example
, a teenager should study about
a specific subject only from the exact books with the same learning methods they used during their Change preposition
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highschool
days back Correct your spelling
high school
then
, so the younger one can have the right source and study more efficiently.
However
, there are some old people
accepting
the fact that teenagers would challenge them Wrong verb form
who accept
back
and Rephrase
apply
being rebel
as a natural response at their stage of life. Change the verb form
rebel
That is
completely fine,
since youngster likes to explore plenty of things and Remove the comma
apply
finding
out Wrong verb form
find
themself
which way is actually working for them. So, they let them Correct pronoun usage
apply
to
chase freedom and not Fix the infinitive
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being
tied to 'outdated' Wrong verb form
be
rules
. For instance
, many parents nowadays let their child to follow their own interest
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interests
while
picking a major at the university, instead
of just following other family opinions about which study can produce more money.
In conclusion, I agree that teenagers should just follow their dreams and pursue what they want without being tied completely to old rules
, this
way they can learn and grow more as a person and able
to compete with Add a missing verb
be able
people
at
their Change preposition
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ages
.Fix the agreement mistake
age
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coherence cohesion
Ensure you present a clear introduction and conclusion that state your view succinctly and cohesively. Focus on creating a more logical flow of ideas.
task achievement
Develop your main points more fully with relevant examples and explanations to substantiate your arguments. Ensure you cover both views and your own opinion throughout the essay.