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Some people think that success is the best way to measure intelligence. Others believe that it can be measured through other useful parameters. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is said that through
intelligence
 one can achieve success.It is a common belief that if a
person
 lacks
intelligence
 what is the
guarnantee
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guarantee
 that the
person
 can acquire success in any other
parametres
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parameters
.
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 I strongly oppose it. In my opinion, one can actually accomplish many things without being smart.
To begin
 with,
intelligence
 does not mean to have an IQ level of 6 or higher it means to resolve the problems.
For example
, if a
person
 is good
in
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 art but has
lower
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a lower
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 IQ level
which
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 means the
person
 is talented.
Therefore
, the
person
 does not need an IQ level to express their skills and abilities. Another point to be considered
that
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 if an individual is not a smart
person
 but has the capacity to achieve the goal and couldn't do so
due to
 their circumstances.
Moreover
, it means the
person
 has been affected financially and people consider him to be a
faliure
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failure
 just because he/she could not achieve their goal. In conclusion, despite having different views about
intelligence
 being the key to success.There are
also
alot
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a lot
 of
parametres
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parameters
 which
needs
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 to be considered
such
 as skills and abilities which
defines
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 the personality of the individual not just being smart and intelligent.
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