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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data. You should write at least 150 words.
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The charts display the proportion of various nutritional compounds in two different foods:
medium-baked
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 potato and
macaroni
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.
Overall
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, there is a larger percentage of
carbohydrates
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 and saturated fat in
macaroni
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 than in
medium-baked
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 potatoes.
In contrast
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,
medium-baked
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 potato has a much higher amount of protein and glucose.
In particular
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,
macaroni
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 mainly consists of large amounts of
carbohydrates
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 and saturated fat.
Carbohydrates
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 take up just over half, 52%,
while
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 saturated fat is made up almost a quarter of the graph. The other nutrients show roughly one-quarter.
On the other hand
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,
medium-baked
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 potato is mostly comprised of
carbohydrates
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 and protein. The percentage of
carbohydrates
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 in the food is less than
macaroni
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, but they still take up nearly a third of 35% of
medium-baked
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 potatoes.
Furthermore
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,
this
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 dinner has a large amount of protein 25%, which is almost a quarter of the chart. The other types of nutrients do not show significant figures but they still have a larger percentage than those in
macaroni
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words medium-baked, macaroni, carbohydrates with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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