The graph belows shows the average daily sales of selected food items at the Brisk Cafe, by seasons.
The bar chart compares the
totals
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total
number
of given food items sold in two different seasons at the Brisk Cafe.
Overall
, Hot coffee
seem
to be the most popular choice among Change the verb form
seems
costumers
in winter seasons, Correct your spelling
customers
whereas
Iced coffee
proves to be the most serves
drink during the summer
In the summer period, hot Wrong verb form
served
coffee
has the biggest number
in sales
, with an average 75
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of 75
serving
sold daily. Fix the agreement mistake
servings
Following
this
, the items
with the second biggest Fix the agreement mistake
item
sales
was soup, with an average of 50 serving
sold daily. Fix the agreement mistake
servings
On the other hand
, salad and ice cream had an average daily sales
of 25 serving
each, and iced Replace the word
servings
coffee
had the lowest number
of sales
, with close to zero servings sold daily.
The sales
of numbers of each food were different in summers
from what they were in winter. Iced Fix the agreement mistake
summer
coffee
sales
rose significantly to an average of 40 serving
. The Fix the agreement mistake
servings
items
with Fix the agreement mistake
item
an
second lead is ice cream, an average of 35 servings sold. Change the article
a
While
, hot coffee
, was decreasing to just 30 serving
sold per day. Soup and salad had the lowest Fix the agreement mistake
servings
number
of sales
, with 25 serving
sold daily on average.Fix the agreement mistake
servings
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