Some people believe that charities should help people in need no matter where those people are in the world,Others feel that these organizations should only serve the people living in the country where they are based Discuss both sides and give your own view.

Other humans think that charity organisations should provide help to the population around the whole
world
,
however
, some believe that helpers must
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only those in their nation.
Thus
,
personally
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I
also
support the fact that Non-Governmental Organizations(NGOs) can give their money or clothes to those who are affected in the
world
.
To begin
with, charities must
taking
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care of all societies above the countries, whether
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Europe, Asia or Africa and
this
is because, as a
nation
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we are all equal.
Furthermore
, though Africa is a poor continent,
this
does not mean all things should go to that side,
whereas
, in
Europe
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Europe,
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we can
also
find beggars and
streets
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children.
Moreover
, it is good to provide capital for them to survive and build their own houses because they don't have
anymore
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.An example to illustrate that
couldd
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be my native country, there is always drought
due to
a lack of rainfall, so if charity
organisation
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organisations
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prefer to support only human beings in their place, others in my home city will suffer and even die.
On the other hand
, it is a better idea to give a hand to
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based
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in their areas,
hence
,
this
is more expensive to export
equipments
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types of equipment
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and raw materials
such
as grain, shoes and blankets from one continent to the other.
For instance
,
population
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the population
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in New Zealand when they
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to accommodate those strugglers in Malawi, it takes about a month or more
while
they use ships to transport goods in bulk.
At
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the end, it does not make sense because the money they spend on transportation will
doubled
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the
prizes
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of those products in Malawi.
To conclude
, the NGOs should help all human beings around the
world
,
instead
of supporting only those in their
motherland's
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.In my opinion, I believe that, since there is unity among us,
so
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we are supposed to be treated the same all over the
world
.
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