The two maps show an island, before and after the construction of tourist facilities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Both maps present how an
island
was developed and further
commercialized for tourism over time.
From the given key, we can see that the island
is roughly 250 meters long and is surrounded entirely by the ocean on all sides. The development of the island
was huge with many facilities added over time in many different areas.
Many facilities were constructed on the island
. Accommodation is now numerous, with 6 buildings erected to the central areas of the island
, and a further
9 rooms added to the east. In the middle of the lodgings, a restaurant and reception area were also
built, with footpaths and vehicle tracks added to connect the buildings.
A pier was built to the south of the island
where boats can arrive and dock. The trees remained unchanged on the island
, with facilities erected around them. The only development to the beach on the west is a swimming area which was added.Submitted by jessica852258 on
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