The two maps show an island, before and after the construction of tourist facilities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two maps show an island, before and after the construction of tourist facilities. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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Both maps present how an

island

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was developed and

further

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commercialized for tourism over time. From the given key, we can see that the

island

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is roughly 250 meters long and is surrounded entirely by the ocean on all sides. The development of the

island

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was huge with many facilities added over time in many different areas. Many facilities were constructed on the

island

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. Accommodation is now numerous, with 6 buildings erected to the central areas of the

island

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, and a

further

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9 rooms added to the east. In the middle of the lodgings, a restaurant and reception area were

also

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built, with footpaths and vehicle tracks added to connect the buildings. A pier was built to the south of the

island

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where boats can arrive and dock. The trees remained unchanged on the

island

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, with facilities erected around them. The only development to the beach on the west is a swimming area which was added.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "further".

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

156 words

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