car ownership has increased so rapidly over past thirty years that may cities in the world are now on big traffic jam. how true you think this statement is? how government should encourage people to reduce using their cars.

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not only becomes a cause of

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makes

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think about its reduction.

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jam has proved that

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are getting more

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in

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era and creating more obstacles in urban

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, I will shed some light on

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statement and give some solution, how government can tackle these problems.

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with,

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has increased day by day as every household purchases a number of

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. To exemplify,

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neglect to be dependent on others and they desire new

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to commute from one place to another,

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,

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have to face

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in big

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.

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have three

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in each house, which,

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, makes big

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crowded.

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, bringing

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on the road has become risky because

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rate is increasing every year

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. To mitigate these problems, the government's intervention has become necessary as

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would not consider reducing

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without rules and regulations. The first step would be to impose a tax on buying

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and limiting car numbers for every family in order to get good results. With

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initiative,

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avoid purchasing more than one car and will learn to share one vehicle.

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, some parking spaces should be paid for so that drivers feel hesitation to travel in their own vehicle

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and

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public transport

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. To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that getting a number of

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puts urban

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in a worse situation but if

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takes some measures regarding

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issue by implementing some above-given rules

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we can protect our beautiful

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from the crowd of

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synonyms in your writing, as you will lose marks if you repeat words from the question and

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the same words in your essay over and over. If you do that, it will show the examiner that you have a limited vocabulary and you want to do the opposite for a high band score. .