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The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph provides information on the
percentage
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 of
people
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 who consumed fast
food
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 in the USA restaurants in the
years
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 2003, 2006 and 2013.
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, it is seen that most
people
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 in all the
years
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 ate
food
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 in restaurants either once a week or twice a month,
however
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, the minority was seen in the extremes where
people
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 either at every day or never consumed outside
food
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. The
percentage
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 of residents in the USA who took away
food
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 from restaurants every day was less than 5% in the year 2003 which
further
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 decreased to 3% by 2013.
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, the
percentage
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 declined in
people
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 who never ate outside from 5 to 4 in the given period. Individuals who packed meals from eatery serval times a week shot up from 17% in 2003 to 20% in 2006 but plummeted to 16% by 2013. The
percentage
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, in terms of
people
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 who ate outside a few times a year increased from 13 in 2003 to 15 in 2006 and remained stable by the end of the period. The highest proportion was reported at 31 where
people
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 in 2003 preferred quick service once a week which increased to 33% and
then
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 declined to 27% in 10
years
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. With the US citizens who chose to eat fast
food
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 once or twice a month , the
percent was
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 decreased to 5% from 2003 to 2006 and significantly increased to almost 35% in
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the next
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years
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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, people, food, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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