The table shows the amount of money given to developing countries by the USA, EU countries and other countries from 2006 to 2010.
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developing countries by charities in different nations,measured in Change preposition
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dollars
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Besides
,The US donated the most during the process.
As for total finance,it began from 15.7 before accelerating consistently to 30 along with
doubling the starting point in 2010.
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the former hiked slowly from 3.3 to 4.0 ,the latter increased from 2.7 to 3.3. despite a marginal explosion in 2009 in both data.Submitted by hominhtrang995 on
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