The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
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The given chart illustrates the residents’ habits of buying and drinking
coffee
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and tea survey results in Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane,
Adelaide
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, and Hobart. Units are measured in percentage.
Overall
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, it can clearly be seen that the people who went to a cafe for
coffee
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or tea were dominant in almost all cities except
Adelaide
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in the
last
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4 weeks. Whilst the others who bought fresh
coffee
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were the lowest in all cities in the given period. In terms of the dominant ones, residents in Melbourne, Hobart, and Sydney were the highest, at about 60%.
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buying instant
coffee
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in
Adelaide
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was the most popular habit, it stood at just under 50% which is slightly over the people’s habits in buying
coffee
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or tea in the
last
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month. Regarding the other ones, the survey about the habits of those who bought fresh
coffee
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was under 45% in all cities which in Brisbane and
Adelaide
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were the lowest at approximately just below 35% throughout the period.
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