The pie chart below show the average household expenditures in Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010.
The pie charts illustrate the percentage of family spending money between
Japan
and Malaysia
in 2010. Overall
, it is clear that
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highest
than the other items during the same period.
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Malaysia
, for housing (34%) was more highest than in Japan
(at 21%). Moreover
, people who spent time to
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Japan
(24%). However
, individuals who
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were
lowest
than others items.
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the number of individuals who expenditures in Remove the preposition
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Japan
, for transportation was largest
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larger
Malaysia
differently 10%. Furthermore
, in
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more
highest in Correct quantifier usage
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Japan
(6% in Japan
and 3% in Malaysia
). In addition
, other goods and services (29%) was
more highest than Change the verb form
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Malaysia
(26%). In contrast
, the healty
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