The chart below shows the results of a survey that sampled a cross section of travelers at a major metropolitan airport about the purpose of their trip. The survey was carried out during four different months in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey that sampled a cross section of travelers at a major metropolitan airport about the purpose of their trip. The survey was carried out during four different months in 2002.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given table provides information about a major metropolitan airport passenger's reason for the visit in four different months in 2002.
Overall
, the majority of passengers came for business purposes in
March
and the second highest percentage of passengers came for vacation during the
month
of
June
while
the very lowest percentage of visitors came for other reasons.
Whereas
the majority of 73% of visitors came to the airport for business purposes in
March
but
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it significantly became lower in the
month
of
June
at about 29% but again there was an improvement in September at 53% and again went down to 34% in the
month
of December. The second largest amount of people's reason for the visit was a holiday and they mostly visited in
June
around 54% but other months comparatively lower.
However
, the very lowest amount of passengers
was
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recorded each
month
for other purposes, in
March
it was the lowest amount at 3% and in
June
at 4% but the remaining two months the
visitors
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visitor's
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proportion was the same at 5%.
Also
, visiting their family members came to around 6% in
March
and it significantly increased
at the end
of the
month
to 26%.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.

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