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The bar chart compares the total amount of 3 main exports from Southland's namely international tourism, dairy and meat products in the years 2000, 2015 and in the projected year in 2025. Units are measured in billions.

The bar chart compares the total amount of 3 main exports from Southland's namely international tourism, dairy and meat products in the years 2000, 2015 and in the projected year in 2025. Units are measured in billions.
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The bar chart shows the comparison of 3 main exportations including International
tourism
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daily
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dairy
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 products and meat products from
Southland’s
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 in 200, 2015 and the predicted year 2025. They are demonstrated in
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billion
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billions
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of euro
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euro
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euros
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.
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, the total amount of International
tourism
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 was expected to grow in 2025, whilst that of the rest two items
were
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 forecasted to reduce. Except for 2015, the vast majority of exports from
Southland’s
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 was International
tourism
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 in 2001 and the projected 2025.
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 the information shown in the diagram, it can be apparently seen that the amount of meat goods was the least in the given year which was 6
billion
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euro
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 in 2001, 5.8
billion
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euro
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 in 2015 and was predicted to diminish to 5
billion
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euro
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 in 2015.
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, the figure for International
tourism
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 grew from 8.1
billion
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euro
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euros
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 to 9
billion
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euro
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euros
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 from 2001 to 2015. It was expected to reach 10
billion
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euro
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 in 2025. What should be particularly mentioned was the amount of daily goods skyrocketed from 7
billion
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euro
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euros
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 to almost 10
billion
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euro
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euros
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 between 2001 and 2015,
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, it was projected to decrease
about
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 0.2
billion
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euro
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 in 2025.
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