The bar chart compares the total amount of 3 main exports from Southland's namely international tourism, dairy and meat products in the years 2000, 2015 and in the projected year in 2025. Units are measured in billions.

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The bar chart shows the comparison of 3 main exportations including International

tourism

daily

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dairy

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products and meat products from

Southland’s

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Southland

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in 200, 2015 and the predicted year 2025. They are demonstrated in

billion

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billions

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of euro

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euro

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euros

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Overall

, the total amount of International

tourism

was expected to grow in 2025, whilst that of the rest two items

were

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forecasted to reduce. Except for 2015, the vast majority of exports from

Southland’s

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Southland

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was International

tourism

in 2001 and the projected 2025.

According to

the information shown in the diagram, it can be apparently seen that the amount of meat goods was the least in the given year which was 6

billion

euro

in 2001, 5.8

billion

euro

in 2015 and was predicted to diminish to 5

billion

euro

in 2015.

By contrast

, the figure for International

tourism

grew from 8.1

billion

euro

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euros

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to 9

billion

euro

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euros

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from 2001 to 2015. It was expected to reach 10

billion

euro

in 2025. What should be particularly mentioned was the amount of daily goods skyrocketed from 7

billion

euro

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euros

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to almost 10

billion

euro

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euros

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between 2001 and 2015,

However

, it was projected to decrease

about

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0.2

billion

euro

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in 2025.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words tourism, billion, euro with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.

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