The table shows the number of medals won by the top ten countries in the 2018 Winter Olympic Games. Write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The table provides information about the top ten countries that won the Olympic
Medals
in the 2018 Winter Olympic Games.
Overall
, it can be seen that at the top of the list, United
States won the highest Correct article usage
the United
number
of medals
while
Australia in the bottom with the lowest number
of gold
reward
. Fix the agreement mistake
rewards
Although
, Hungary won the least total sum of awards in the London Olympic games.
However
, the total number
of medals
received by the United States at 104 and with 46 gold
medals
it reached first position while
the second place went to China with 38 gold
out of 88 total reward
. The third spot occupied by the United Kingdom with 29 Change to a plural noun
rewards
gold
but the total number
was less than Russia which is received the fourth spot in the list.
On the other hand
, only 7 gold
medals
were received by Australia which led them to the tenth place in the list while
Italy and Hungary won 8 gold
medals
but the total count for Italy was 28 therefore
it got higher than Hungary. Although
, the large number
of Brozon medals
won by Russia.Submitted by me.sara22 on
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