The table shows the number of medals won by the top ten countries in the 2018 Winter Olympic Games.

The table shows the number of medals won by the top ten countries in the 2018 Winter Olympic Games.
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The table provides information about the top ten countries that won the Olympic
Medals
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in the 2018 Winter Olympic Games.
Overall
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, it can be seen that at the top of the list,
United
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States won the highest
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of
medals
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while
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Australia in the bottom with the lowest
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of
gold
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reward
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.
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, Hungary won the least total sum of awards in the London Olympic games.
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, the total
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of
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received by the United States at 104 and with 46
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medals
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it reached first position
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the second place went to China with 38
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out of 88 total
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. The third spot occupied by the United Kingdom with 29
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but the total
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was less than Russia which is received the fourth spot in the list.
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, only 7
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medals
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were received by Australia which led them to the tenth place in the list
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Italy and Hungary won 8
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medals
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but the total count for Italy was 28
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it got higher than Hungary.
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, the large
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of Brozon
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won by Russia.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although, while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words medals, number, gold with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Winter Olympic Games
  • medal count
  • medal tally
  • gold, silver, bronze medals
  • ranking
  • dominant countries
  • athletic performance
  • medal standings
  • podium finishes
  • olympic achievements
  • top contenders
  • competitive edge
  • historical record
  • national pride
  • sportsmanship
  • medal distribution
  • overall trend
  • athletic prowess
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