The diagram below shows the process of cement manufacturing. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the procedure
of
the production of Change preposition
for
cement
.
Overall
, It involves a series of steps beginning from a limestone
quarry and terminating with cement
shipping.
The process of cement
production begins with the excavation of limestone
from the quarry. The excavated limestone
is then
transferred to a dump truck and processed through a series of crushers with conveyor belts to create finely grounded limestone
. Then
, the finely grounded limestone
is moved to two cylindrical shape
tanks that contain sand and clay, respectively, to mix together in a grinding mill.
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cylindrical-shaped
Further
, mixture
can be moved to a vertical preheater tower that contains three vertical tanks, after which it is transferred to the rotating heated tube (kiln). Add an article
the mixture
Following
this
, the mixture is taken to the clinker cooler where the heat can be recycled to the preheated tower. Then
, the clinker moves to a tank where gypsum is added before it is turned into a rotating tube for a proper blend. Finally
, the mixture is processed further
to the four cement
storage tanks and then
transported to the market in bulk quantities by trucks.Submitted by shubhashish.bobby on
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