The first chart below shows how energy is used in average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emission which result from this energy use. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The first chart below shows how energy is used in average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emission which result from this energy use.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate
the
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information about how
energy
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use
from
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by
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the household and the
greenhouse
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gas
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emissions from the household in Australia
such
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as
colling
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cooling
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, heating, refrigeration,
water
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bheating
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heating
, lighting and other
aplpliances
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appliances
.
Overall
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, the
australians
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Australians
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are mostly used
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have mostly used
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the
energy
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for heating and it cause the
greenhouse
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gas
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emmission
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emissions
emission
is the second largest, and the most
greenhouse
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gas
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is
water
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heating. The graph shows that heating is used more
energy
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as compared to
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cooling, at just above two-fifths and 2
perecent
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per cent
respectively.
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water
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heating is the second largest
energy
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utilise, which is 30 per cent,
in contrast
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, other appliances,
refrigrator
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refrigerator
refrigerators
and lighting are used
minimum
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the minimum
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amount of
energy
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, at 15%, 7% and 4% respectively.
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,
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water
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heating
is
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has
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more
out
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the
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greenhouse
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gas
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emissions, at 32 per cent
while
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other appliances
is
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are
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the second largest, which is 28%. The refrigerator and heating release
gas
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from the household
alomst
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almost
the same amount, at 15 and 14 per cent. lighting and cooling are the least amount of the
greenhouse
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gas
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emission, at just under a fifth and 3% respectively.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words energy, greenhouse, gas, water with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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