Writing Task Read the question below and write an essay/interpretation of the graph/Diagram/Pie Chart/Map. The two maps below show the Sunny Island before and after its commercialization. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given diagram

depict

Change the verb form

depicts

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that

Correct word choice

apply

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the sunny island before and after the construction of

area

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the area

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Overall

Linking Words

, over the span of several years, it is observed that the development of the forest area completely

turn

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turns

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into

Correct article usage

the touriest

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touriest

Correct your spelling

tourist

tourists

visiting place including many accommodations. Earlier, there

Wrong verb form

was

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only a land with an empty area with few trees which

Wrong verb form

was

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surrounded by seawater with a

beach

Use synonyms

at one corner. Later, the land was completely transformed with various new facilities for visitors, which

includes

Correct subject-verb agreement

include

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restaurant

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a restaurant

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, reception in

center

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the center

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, pier for boart, swimming facility on the

beach

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and so on. Interesting

think

Correct your spelling

thing

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is that the plants and trees were not cut

Correct your spelling

for

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building these constructions and most of the development

made

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was made

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near the

beach

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further

Linking Words

, the footpaths and roads for vehicle facility had created for

tourist

Fix the agreement mistake

tourists

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, where the footpath made to walk between the 15 resting places and connected to the

beach

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as well, and the road can join with

restaurant

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restaurants

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resption

Correct your spelling

reception

are

Correct your spelling

area

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and

pier

Correct article usage

a pier

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Dec 16, 2023

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words beach with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
19
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

159 words

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