The map below is of the town of Canterbury. A new school (S) is planned for the area. The map shows two possible sites for the school.
The illustrated map shows the two possible sites of
school
, Fix the agreement mistake
schools
that
is
Correct subject-verb agreement
are
plainnig
to be built in the Canterbury.
Correct your spelling
planning
planned
Overall
, each of two
places has its own pros and cons in comparison with another like location in Correct article usage
the two
rural
area or nearly to Add an article
a rural
housings
.
Fix the agreement mistake
housing
S1
area is located in the north-west of the Canterbury and placed just next to the housings. Because Correct article usage
The S1
of
Change preposition
apply
this
point is near to main
road, that goes to Sturry only five Change the article
the main
kilometres
it could be very comfortable Add a comma
kilometres,
of
its citizens to reach the school, driving to the south-west. But Change preposition
for
on the other hand
, it would be difficult for the Chartham residents who will be forced to travel seven kilometres to north-east, despite that the town has less population.
S2
area is located right in the Correct article usage
The S2
center
of Canterbury and approximately equally distanced Change the spelling
centre
to
both towns, Change preposition
from
that
would be comfortable to reach for all students. Correct pronoun usage
which
Furthermore
, S2 is near to
all students, who live in Change preposition
apply
housings
, but because Fix the agreement mistake
housing
of
it is not Change preposition
apply
the
traffic Correct article usage
a
zone
it will be complicated for parents to let down their children.Add a comma
zone,
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