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Formal examinations are the only effective way to assess a student's performance. Continual assessment such as coursework and projects is not a satisfactory way to do this. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is argued that formal examinations are the better way to estimate
learners
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learners'
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 ability to demonstrate their
knowledge
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 rather than coursework or continuous projects. In my opinion, it is important to provide
exams
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, but
such
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 type of assessment cannot be the only one. It is common for most
students
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 to be nervous during formal
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 because of
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 huge pressure of
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responsibility
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, there is not enough
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 for
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 to demonstrate all their
knowledge
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.
According to
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 these factors, formal examinations might be not the best way to estimate
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students
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knowledge
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.
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, the format of
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 is
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quite strict
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 and is a reason for the anxiety. The process of examination is stressful for most
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students
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. If they are too stressed it might
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on
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their exam results.
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high school results of final
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 are essential for future enrollment into universities.
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, formal examinations might not be
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 effective
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 stress.
Secondly
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, most of
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exams
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the exams
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 are provided in a restricted period of
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.
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students
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 have a short
time
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 to prepare their answers and answer questions. The given
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 might not be enough to demonstrate
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the range of
knowledge
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.
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, during
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an average
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 school exam
students
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 have to choose one or two
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 and be prepared after less
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then
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than
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 fifteen minutes.
Therefore
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, there is no
time
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 for a good
perfomance
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performance
. In conclusion, there is no one effective way to estimate
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learners'
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knowledge
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. Formal
eximanations
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examinations
 are good, but at the same
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time
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time,
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 they are combined with a lot of stress and lack of
time
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 to show
knowledge
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. Coursework or school
project
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projects
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,
on the other hand
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, can be less stressful and give
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plenty amount of
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 to demonstrate a variety of
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students
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students'
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knowledge
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 and skills, including
ability
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the ability
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 to present their work.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • standardized assessment
  • criteria
  • benchmark
  • performance comparison
  • evaluation under pressure
  • simulate
  • real-world scenarios
  • time management
  • comprehensive coverage
  • subject grasp
  • objectivity
  • lifelong learning
  • engagement
  • practical application
  • skill development
  • creativity
  • critical thinking
  • problem-solving abilities
  • individualized feedback
  • student well-being
  • exam stress
  • academic environment
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