The two maps show an island before and after the construction of tourist facilities.
The maps show the developments, which took place after some changes in
illustrated
Add an article
the illustrated
island
.
Overall
, the comparison of two
maps reveals a change from an Correct article usage
the two
unhibited
to Correct your spelling
uninhibited
touristic
landscape.
Before the Correct article usage
a touristic
island
was much greener with a huge amount of trees there, but during the shifts the island
experienced a number of dramatic changes. The most noticeable is the building of the facilities all over the area excepting
the right Wrong verb form
except
side
, with building
the pear in the lower part of Verb problem
apply
an
Correct article usage
the
island
. Moreover
a new Add a comma
Moreover,
touristic
estate with huts sprang up around the Replace the word
tourist
the
trees Remove the redundancy
apply
in
the left Change preposition
on
side
of the island
.
Only a small place in
the right Change preposition
on
side
of an area remained undeveloped. The central part of and island
make
way to the reception and restaurant, which have a path to the downside Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
to
Change preposition
of
pier
. Add an article
the pier
Further
developments were the building of paths all over the recreational zone until the beach on the left side
of the island
, which
became suitable for swimming.Correct pronoun usage
apply
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