The chart shows the information about average weekly spending of income by families in 1968 and in 2018.

The chart shows the information about average weekly spending of income by families in 1968 and in 2018.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart shows the information about average weekly spending of income by families in 1968 and in 2018.
The graph shows the difference in average weekly families’ spending between 1968 and 2018. in percentage divided into some categories,
such
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as ‘food’, ‘housing’, ‘fuel and power’, ‘clothing and footwear’, ‘household goods’, ‘personal goods’, ‘transport’ and ‘leisure’. The absolute leader of families’ spending in 1968 was ‘food’, it took 35% of all
spendings
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spending
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,
while
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in 2018
this
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category reduced to 17% just after ‘housing’ and ‘leisure’, which took 19% and 23% respectively. ‘Household goods’ stayed constant for the entire time of the research at 6% of all spending. The tendency
of reducing
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to reduce
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spending on consumption like ‘fuel and power’, ‘food’, ‘clothing and
footware
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footwear
’ and ‘personal goods’ is obvious. All these categories declined from 1968 to 2018. Families in 2018
prefered
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preferred
to spend money
for
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on
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such
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categories as ‘leisure’, ‘transport’ and ‘housing’. In 2018 the leader of families’
spendings
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spending
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was ‘leisure’, it rose from 9% in 1968 to 23% in 2018.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
Vocabulary: Replace the words goods’, ‘leisure’ with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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