The diagrams show the structure of a solar panel and its use.

The diagrams show the structure of a solar panel and its use.
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These images show the actual structures of solar panels, showing their diverse uses. In general, we can see that the blueprints are rarely simple, and their functions are to warm
air
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and
water
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using solar energy.
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, the solar panel system has a can with an inlet and outlet on both sides. The inlet allows access to
air
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and
water
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,
whereas
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the outlet allows
air
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and
water
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to escape. A transparent glass was placed on top of the can to catch the sun's rays. When the process began, sun rays were projected onto a glass plate, where they were absorbed and converted to energy. When
air
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enters the inlet, it is heated by the power generated and turns into warm
air
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.
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,
water
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was led through a zigzag pipe into the jug and boiled to warm
water
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for use.
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