The chart below gives Information about the percentage of the adult population who were overweight in four different countries in 1980,1990 and 2000.

The chart below gives Information about the percentage of the adult

population who were overweight in four different countries in 1980,1990 and 2000.
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diversification in the rate of obese adults in four different regions in 1980,from 1990 to 2000 America's indicators are ahead of other countries.It increased from about 15 percent in 1980 to about 35 percent in 2000. The year 2000 is more distinct among Australia's obesity outcomes.Finland's percentage in 1990 and Australia's in 1980 are almost the same. There is not a very sharp difference between the annual interest rates of Finland. Japan has the lowest and most stable annual interest rates.In 2000, it approached 5
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, taking all the results into account, it can be said that the least growth was in Japan, and the most in Australia and America
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