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The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables give information about the temperatures and hours of daylight in London and Sydney during the same weekend in December 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The tables compare the data of temperature and time of sunrise and sunset in
London
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 and Sydney on the same three
days
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 in December 2018.
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, Sydney witnessed warmer temperatures and had longer daytime compared to
London
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. The first table displays
London
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’s detailed information which its temperature varied between 4°
C
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 and 13°
C
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 throughout the period.
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 city had significantly lower temperatures compared to Sydney’s minimum level. Sun began to rise around 8 am and it set before 4 pm. The sunlight only lasted approximately eight hours. The second table shows Sydney’s conditions during the three
days
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. It had a much higher temperature which ranged between 17°
C
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 and 31°
C
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.
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 Australian city was hotter than
London
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 during those three
days
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. In
this
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 city, the sun rose 2 hours earlier than in
London
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 and the dusk came late at around 8 pm. On those
days
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, Sydney faced six hours longer daytime compared to
London
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words london, days, c with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compare" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • temperatures
  • hours of daylight
  • comparison
  • London
  • Sydney
  • December 2018
  • weekend
  • information
  • data
  • summarise
  • select
  • report
  • features
  • analysis
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