The bar chart shows the percentage of the total world population in 4 countries in 1950 and 2002, and projections for 2050.
The given diagram illustrates the percentage of the total world
population
in India
, China
, USA
and Correct article usage
the USA
Japan
from 1950 to 2002 and predicted
amount for 2050.
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the predicted
Overall
, it can be seen that the most distribution
country Replace the word
distributed
of
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population
is China
, followed by India
whereas
USA
and Correct article usage
the USA
Japan
had the lessest
contribution among Correct your spelling
least
four
countries. In Correct article usage
the four
comparsion
, Correct your spelling
comparison
China
and Japan
show a down trend
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downtrend
while
India
experiences an upward trend.
To begin
with, China
had the highest population
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starting
from1950
at around 23%, Correct your spelling
from 1950
however
, it slightly decreased to 20% and estimated
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is estimated
fall
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to fall
into
15% in 2050. Change preposition
to
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Similarly
Japan
also
showed a downward tendency from 4% in 1950 and predicted dropped
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a drop
into
1% Change preposition
to
in
the end of Change the preposition
at
period
.
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the period
On the other hand
, India
's population
has a
up Change the article
an
going
trend with 15% in the beginning and Verb problem
apply
forecated
increased by 4% to Wrong verb form
the forecast
near
20%. Change the word
nearly
Moreover
, population
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the population
USA
was around 6% at Correct article usage
the USA
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started
but declined to 5% in 2002 and remained unchanged Change the form of the verb
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of
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in
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