The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and ,are comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate the digital sales figures for four different retail
businesses
namely travel, film or music, books and clothes in New Zealand in 2003 and 2013.
Looking from an overall
perspective, the tourism industry used to dominate the market
share in 2003 before being topped by the entertainment sector a decade later. Entertainment products such
as film and music generated the largest sales number in 2013 whilst all other businesses
except books lost market
share.
Within the period given, the growing industries were show business (showbiz) and book retail with 21% and 19%, respectively. Show business witnessed a huge escalation to reach 33% and went from third place to the top rank in the market
in 2013. Likewise
, the literary industry had a notable increase of 3% and ranked third outperforming fashion retail in 2013.
On the contrary
, travelling businesses
and clothing lines which ranked first and second in the market
, were two dominating industries at 36% and 24%, respectively. However
, the tourism sector dropped significantly to 29% and descended to second place in 2013. In the same way, apparel businesses
bottomed out from the second place to the last
rank with a major decrease of 8% to 16%.Submitted by 2024successielts on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words businesses, market with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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