The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
The first graph illustrates the major causes of reduced production on farmland, and the second one shows the effects that these specific causes had on three separate continents during
1990s
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the 1990s
Overall
, the main reason for land degradation worldwide was over-grazing. Also
, Europe became the highest figure in total degraded land among the other continents.
A closer look at the data showed that over-grazing for the livestock spot was the primary driving factor on international land degradation with 35%, but this
proportion was closely followed by deforestation and over-cultivation at 30% and 28% respectively. Not only this
, other causes influenced a small percentage represented in the pie chart.Submitted by dyahkusumaningrum18 on
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