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The pie charts give information about the world’s forest in five different regions.

The pie charts give information about the world’s forest in five different regions.
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The pie charts below show the percentages of
forest
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 and
timber
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in
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 five different continents.
Overall
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, the data gives information that Africa has the highest percentage of
forest
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 about 27% and
Asia
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 is the lowest with 14% of
forest
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 area. The highest percentage of world forests is about 27% which is had by Africa.
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, in second place is North
America
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 which only has a 2% difference. The three other regions, South
America
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, Europe, and
Asia
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 have under 20% of
forest
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 in their area where South
America
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 has 18%, Europe has 16%, and
Asia
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 is the lowest with 14%. The
timber
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 component in forests of these regions is not higher than 30%. The highest
timber
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 percentage is had by North
America
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 at 30% followed by South
America
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 and Europe with 23% and 20% for each of them.
Asia
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 has 18%
timber
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 component of its
forest
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.
In contrast
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, Africa only has 9%
timber
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 component
while
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 its
forest
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 is the largest among the continents.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words forest, timber, asia, america with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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